New look, obviously. Still working out some bugs. Let me know what you think!
Yeah, so I've been promising new writing. Now that I actually typed up some stuff, I'm not at all confident I like it. I think I'll run with a poem today. I want to think about some of the wordage I used in my new short story before I post it.
Anyways, any thoughts on this poem would make me happy...I'm not sure what I think yet.
Nowhere near as good as the song in my blog title...I think I might take this down and put that up...or maybe I'll just change the third line...
“Blind”
If I could only see,
That You are love,
That I’m becoming love,
I would never cease to seek You out.
That You bring my joy,
That all happiness is found in You,
I would never cease to follow You.
That You bring me wisdom,
That You alone provide me with counsel,
I would never cease to submit to You.
That You are everything and the only thing eternal,
That I bring empty hands and nothing desirable,
I would never want for less than You,
Nor ever want in the care of Your love.
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